The Ghost needs a proof reader! (that was proof Deano )

http://carltonfc.com.au/default.asp?pg= ... eid=275427

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This type of slight is alien in the more cultured part of the world - Walsh. Its up there with mad dogs, Englishmen and the midday sun!

2nd para: Cramer Street; two full stops at end of paragraph.

3rd para: Starts with an indent (inconsistent).

4th para: Oh ye faithful/of little faith.

5th para: Now imagine, if you will, my delight… …kicking the ball down there so often…

6th para: His last two games in defence have been standouts!

9th para: Fact is, I think we’ll being singing ‘The Lily’ again!

General comment: Go easy on the exclamation marks!!!


Let me know when it goes live, it's a good read.

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Hope your footy team wins.

goes live Huh?

gee ta camel, you literal beast you....But yes, next time I may just have to reread the damn thing!

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This type of slight is alien in the more cultured part of the world - Walsh. Its up there with mad dogs, Englishmen and the midday sun!

Ahhh McGoo, you've done it again!!

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2002:> "In their Masters Chambers
They Gathered for their Feast
They Stabbed us with their Steely Knives
But They Just Can't Kill The Beast!" <2016

THE BLUEBAGGER BEAST IS BAACKK!!

No worries Danny.

I only did it because I knew you'd see the humour … you did didn't you?

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Hope your footy team wins.

Good read DB.
Following our youngsters particularly in the bullants has certainly kept my interest up in footy the last couple of seasons. Good times for the blues are not far away

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There's so much I could say...

my son only wants to go to the bullants games!!!!!!!!!!!! But hey he undertands tanking, just hates losing

but yes. I think we are getting closer all the time.....

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This type of slight is alien in the more cultured part of the world - Walsh. Its up there with mad dogs, Englishmen and the midday sun!