The Ghost needs a proof reader! (that was proof Deano
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| Author: | dannyboy [ Thu Jun 22, 2006 2:29 pm ] |
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The Ghost needs a proof reader! (that was proof Deano )
http://carltonfc.com.au/default.asp?pg= ... eid=275427 |
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| Author: | camel [ Thu Jun 22, 2006 3:42 pm ] |
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2nd para: Cramer Street; two full stops at end of paragraph. 3rd para: Starts with an indent (inconsistent). 4th para: Oh ye faithful/of little faith. 5th para: Now imagine, if you will, my delight… …kicking the ball down there so often… 6th para: His last two games in defence have been standouts! 9th para: Fact is, I think we’ll being singing ‘The Lily’ again! General comment: Go easy on the exclamation marks!!! 
Let me know when it goes live, it's a good read. |
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| Author: | dannyboy [ Thu Jun 22, 2006 4:15 pm ] |
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goes live Huh? gee ta camel, you literal beast you....But yes, next time I may just have to reread the damn thing! 
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| Author: | BrizzyBlue [ Thu Jun 22, 2006 4:23 pm ] |
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dannyboy wrote: goes live Huh?
gee ta camel, you literal beast you....But yes, next time I may just have to reread the damn thing! Ahhh McGoo, you've done it again!!
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| Author: | camel [ Thu Jun 22, 2006 4:37 pm ] |
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dannyboy wrote: goes live Huh?
gee ta camel, you literal beast you....But yes, next time I may just have to reread the damn thing! No worries Danny. 
I only did it because I knew you'd see the humour … you did didn't you?
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| Author: | budzy [ Thu Jun 22, 2006 4:59 pm ] |
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Good read DB. Following our youngsters particularly in the bullants has certainly kept my interest up in footy the last couple of seasons. Good times for the blues are not far away 
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| Author: | dannyboy [ Thu Jun 22, 2006 5:14 pm ] |
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my son only wants to go to the bullants games!!!!!!!!!!!! But hey he undertands tanking, just hates losing
but yes. I think we are getting closer all the time..... |
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