I see Red

dannyboy · **Posted:** Thu Jun 22, 2006 2:29 pm

The Ghost needs a proof reader! (that was proof Deano

)

http://carltonfc.com.au/default.asp?pg= ... eid=275427

camel · **Posted:** Thu Jun 22, 2006 3:42 pm

2nd para: Cramer Street; two full stops at end of paragraph.

3rd para: Starts with an indent (inconsistent).

4th para: Oh ye faithful/of little faith.

5th para: Now imagine, if you will, my delightâ€¦ â€¦kicking the ball down there so oftenâ€¦

6th para: His last two games in defence have been standouts!

9th para: Fact is, I think weâ€™ll being singing â€˜The Lilyâ€™ again!

General comment: Go easy on the exclamation marks!!!

Let me know when it goes live, it's a good read.

dannyboy · **Posted:** Thu Jun 22, 2006 4:15 pm

goes live Huh?

gee ta camel, you literal beast you....But yes, next time I may just have to reread the damn thing! :oops:

BrizzyBlue · **Posted:** Thu Jun 22, 2006 4:23 pm

dannyboy wrote:

goes live Huh?

gee ta camel, you literal beast you....But yes, next time I may just have to reread the damn thing! :oops:

Ahhh McGoo, you've done it again!!

camel · **Posted:** Thu Jun 22, 2006 4:37 pm

dannyboy wrote:

goes live Huh?

gee ta camel, you literal beast you....But yes, next time I may just have to reread the damn thing! :oops:

No worries Danny. :lol:

I only did it because I knew you'd see the humour â€¦ you did didn't you?

budzy · **Joined:** Mon Feb 28, 2005 11:17 am **Posts:** 8128

Good read DB.
Following our youngsters particularly in the bullants has certainly kept my interest up in footy the last couple of seasons. Good times for the blues are not far away

dannyboy · **Posted:** Thu Jun 22, 2006 5:14 pm

my son only wants to go to the bullants games!!!!!!!!!!!! But hey he undertands tanking, just hates losing

but yes. I think we are getting closer all the time.....

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